Would you read my story?

I would like some feedback on it. It is called- Zombie prince. It is about a girl, who discovers a strange happening in her home town, and about herself as well. Through these strange events she finds that she has a connection to long forgotten undead prince. I wrote this story a while ago, I've only post a small portion, please tell me what you think if you are interested. a href="http://www.wattpad.com/uploadpreview?id=new&title=&language=1&tags=zombies%2C+fiction%2C+&source=http%3A%2F%2F©right=1&flag1=0&youtube=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D&photos=&groupid=0&rating=3&category1=8&category2=11&draft=1&authorid=721405&distributable=0&tex" rel="nofollow"http://www.wattpad.com/uploadpreview?id=…/a